Hemingway Creative Piece

I awaken as I fall off a couch. I somehow fell asleep while a party was going on. It was a tough night as I got in a couple fights. One of them was embarrassing because I had lost a 15 year old girl. It was around 9:00 o’clock I fell asleep. Then I wake up and I sit in the corner. I the darkest part of the room as I think about my life being ruined. I was in despair with my life. I had kept thinking to myself that my life had been ruined by the choices I had made last night. I wait for my friends to wake up to give me a ride home. I hadn’t been feeling the greatest either while I was waiting. I had too much to drink and that’s how I fell asleep. I kind of got knocked out or something. Anyways horrible experience. My life is ruined anyways so I don’t see why it’s a big deal  while drinking. While I’m still waiting here in the corner of the room I see 3 people in black suits ,and they have weapons, out of the corner of my eye. Through the window I see them. I can tell they are here to do damage to some people. I turn  run around and face the wall. It seemed like they had this all planned out because the power went out and the lights started flickering on and off with no light switch moving or anything. They barge in and they start the firing of the guns. The fires woke everyone and some were killed for trying to run away. I tried snaking out and when I started walking away from them backwards I knocked into something and plates and cups fell all over. One of the three people turn around and fires…

Creative Piece

     Have you ever been interested in the NHL ( National Hockey League)? In my opinion the best sport in the world? Well I think the best part of it is when the “Winter Classic” goes on. This is where two teams face off in an outdoor hockey rink. The rink is usually on a Baseball field. For example the Pittsburgh Penguins and the Buffalo Sabers faced off in a battle on the Philadelphia Phillies MLB stadium. Well I play hockey and I am going get a great chance to play on an outdoor hockey rink and prove to my coach that I can play great on any condition.

It was a 2 hour drive to the outdoor hockey rink in Illinois. As we got there we realized it was nothing like the NHL “Winter Class”. The stands in a normal hockey rink are nice and these were like the ones at a tee-ball baseball game , and a horrible hockey rink.  I have never seen anything like it, in a bad way. Anyways I met up with my team and I began a regular routine in our warm-up. When we finished we went to the locker room that smelt horrible and had unstable benches for us to get dressed on. It was really hard to get dressed and it was not the best experience. As usual  when we were all done getting dressed  our Coach gave us a little pep talk. It was on like what plays we need to do and how to beat this team.

When I stepped on the ice my blade on the bottom of my skate shined so brightly as the clear ice reflected on it. I skated around and we got into our on-ice warm up. Then both teams went to their benches and the coaches sent out 5 guys from our team. The game started and it was something I have never done before which was skate on an outdoor hockey rink. It was an excellent challenge for both teams because we were in tough conditions. Our team has played so many great teams this  season and with these conditions, once again, an excellent challenge. It will get us ready for when we get older.

Anyways the game started and I took the face-off and the puck went back to my team. I went to get open for the puck as I support my defender. He passes the puck to the winger and he bumps the puck to me. I’m at the middle line of the ice rink and I am breathing for air with butterflies in my stomach and I have the urge to take the puck and “dangle” threw every one. As I thought in my head that this was my game to prove to my coach that I can do this. I took the puck and made it threw for 3 people and took it around the last person on their team and shot the puck backhanded. My eyes were closed with anxiously to score a goal. I at last shot it and I hear the crowd roar as I celebrate with my teammates. It was a awesome experience to do this. I went to bench and I sat down trying to catch my breath. I grabbed a drink of water and rested for my next shift. I was taking deep breaths as I smile and look at my dad in the stands as he looks at me with a smile on his face. Then the line before us came off and I went on. This next I came on and I forced the other team in their side of the ice and I come in speeding fast. I focus my body on the other teams guy and come up to him and “BOOM”. He goes right through the glass and into the stands. This summer and year I have been working on getting my body stronger. This proved it. I nailed him right through the glass! The crowd was shocked with excitement. But, it was also bad because the guy was injured very badly. So was the crowd. I came over to the bench and was congratulated for the big hit I made.

After all the good things that happened to me that first half of the game I bet you thought It couldn’t get worst. Well you’re were right the game went on and we won. The best game I have ever played and I made it worthwhile. I reached my goal and proved my coach that I can play my best.        

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